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Writing usually is done by yourself and be revised by instructor and rewrite again by yourself. Now a collaborative writing has appeared and there is one called Writeboard created by 37 signal web company. As you had viewed the article made by someone then Writeboard has such a nice function that let you revise the inappropriate sentences, bad grammar, new viewpoints if you want. Actually, this idea has bloomed that it may thank to the time of Web 2.0 which has been coming. Corresponding to collaborative power of Web2.0, problems proposed by people have more chance to be solved by intelligent individuals who has seen the posted problems. Moreover, same to Writeboard, an article cannot be perfect just written one time; it has to revise again and agian just like design software has to debug again and again. Otherwise, you can face the problem yourself but may need more time and money to get things done.
Another benefit from Web 2.0 is "forum". A online forum combines together valuable ideas, knowledge, and information. Usually people who have common interest will be seeing each other, knowing each other from a forum due to same desire of goal, such as TV games, sports, gambling, etc. Using your hand to write your question on a forum, later on, a respond will be shown to your question. Ironically, some information has to be dug in there which clever guys only want to appear on the specific forum. Furthermore, software engineers could use collaborative tools to get jobs done. We know writing huge software programming cannot be done by one person, it needs to gather a bunch of genius engineers to collaborate together, perhaps one engineer wrote this part of program then posted on the wrting tools on the Intranet/ internet; other engineers began to revise the programming, debug it then posted it back to let the original software programmer to rearrange it. Software programming used in collaborative writing tool is common but also we can see scientists used collaborative writing to discuss research with their colleagues or same field characteristic work done by other scientists of other countries. However, thanks to google that it saves lots of time to find people's need in a short time.
I personally have few experience on collaborative writing, probably I am not a writer, I am a electrical engineer. In my opinion, journalists will need collaborative writing during their work and software engineers all need that while they are creating troubling computer language. For me, I need collaborative design for drawing with AutoCad but writing.
The software, Campfire, made by 37 signal is impressive to me. I downloaded and tried, then I found that it is useful to group meeting, especially in transferring big files. We know transferring big file need time and patience; the faster the speed , the more successful achievement is. Nevertheless, it is still few people know about this software.
Designing effective visuals must have clear purpose to fit audience stomach. To think what audience needs? Why they need that information? Further, selecting suitable visual in technical description is much important to audience to let them realize effectively.The keys between a press release and web writing must be different in contrast in many ways. First, we have to discover what components should be listed in web writing.
• Focus on Interest of Levels
• Images might be better than text
• Methodology for shortening summary into a short informative title
Those three highlights are particular ways to distinguish from press release writing.
In my way of writing product info in web writing, I filter who are my audience first, and then create an informative title and a simple summary. To differ from press release, photographs, videos and realistic drawings are required. Those are visuals that can show figure structure of patterns to let readers know product substantially. A link from the title is necessary for further information if readers have more interests and want to explore in detail. Hence, parts of a product have to be shown individually, such as blueprints, pictures or drawing of individual parts, exploded views, cutaway views, which gave readers comprehensive information in exploring a product. For example, when we go to IKEA, first we do is to take a catalog book, then see what we are interested in, then look for the stuff we need. But we don’t know how to assemble individual part, that’s why a exploded views of stuff is needed. It has to be exploded because it shows proper relationship to each component to get combined together.
Exploded examples shows below:
For different age of audience, it is hard to design a web writing all together and suit all age of audience. Like teenagers and adults, they all have PSP gadget. In web writing with only text, it exists difficulty to let young audience to understand the procedure as Game Boot, however, adults can easily know how to do by only text writing. Moreover, to suit young people level, a video or a flash designed manual is needed for them to get understood easily. See the example in Youtube:
The differences between web writing and ordinary writing are
• phraseology
• rhetoric
Let's take a look at New York Times, a great deal of uncommen vocabularies are being used in articles. I don't say it wants to express high level of knowledge to show how they are good at vacabularies, but I would say this is the deference of writing between web and ordinary.
Elements of FIVE- audience’s task, components, descriptions visuals and organization, are main subject in creating a design of web writing. External elements of THREE- interests, images, and methodology are secondary thoughts to get better in web writing. Combine those all together, a nice done work will be shown easily.
Within pace getting more convenient in web tools of design, more various, beautiful, amazing web pages show us spectatular scenes to entertain us our life, especially the web tool of Flash.Amazing website provided as SIRE, first scene in the first page heavily drew our attention, also the sound effects. When I logged in, I thought I was in a horrible movie introducing website, then I fianlly found out it is about society issues based on Netherland, very impressive. I mean Flash has improved much as I thought than before I have touched.
Let's talk about SIRE's color and sound design. Because it is a site about children issues in society problem,so the site need to create very gloomy and murky, and that will reflect how dark side of issues which let audience think it is very horrible issues happening in Netherlands. Sound effect is pretty much done in dreadful creation, probably nbrave audience will turn it off as soon as possible.But it is designed as that because of the same reason of above. We know creepy sounds may happen in horror movies, but now we see this website also has the same creepy as we see in movies, that may impress audience whom are brave that they did not close off the page as soon as possible. How much do audience join into the website? six or more clicks for every issue is done in this Flash. Every click will lead hazy text to clear text, that gave audience joyment of participation. This is actually a important role with Flash to let audience take participation. Flash will make vivid to webpage; others don't.Flash do moving effect; others can do but not impressive. That is why Flash is getting rage these days.
At last, I don't say any bad design of this site except creepy sound, because I did a experiment that I sent this site to my female friends. 8 of 10 chose to close it off when they hear the creepy sound, probably it is bad design to put the music on the first page. Maybe to put behind is better thought.
Perhaps you have already heard of some characteristics of web 2.0, such as Blog, OpenAPIs, RSS. Do you think Flickr or Youtube these concepts websites can be represented Web 2.0? Actually, it’s NOT.
Let’s imagine how Web 2.0 consist of. The first part---RIA (Rich Internet Application), such as Flash, Ajax and etc. network application technologies are under RIA control in which can enhance users’ IE experience, easily operate from desktop interface to IE, just like, the most typical function---support drag in webpages.
Second, SOA (Service-Oriented Architecture), a structure which can provide open sources and communicate with different ISP’s network applications to coordinate in operation. To be a member of Web 2.0, such as Feeds, RSS, Web Services, Mash-up, actually Mash-up, we use it every day. For example, Yahoo or Google provides API interface function module, which can directly result in a serious of Yahoo Map or Google Earth, a third network service, being operated.
What is Web 2.0 doing now today is to build up people as Internet of the starting point. From knowledge point of view, Web 1.0 task was using human knowledge through the power of commerce that can be put on Internet. Web 2.0 task uses these knowledge through every user’s power of desire of seeking knowledge, to coordinate works, organize all the knowledge put together; during the processes, Web 2.0 still deepens knowledge continuously and creates new sparks of new ideas.
From technical view, Web 2.0 is more customized, more efficient at work, such as Ajax technology, Google Map/ Gamil can interact with each other during operating.
What I believe is Web 2.0 is a network provided from a core of human beings, and it provides more convenient net tools to users, stimulate to provide contents, result from the tracks which users had left organizing clues of exploring, providing related web services, creating brand new values and expectation, and that is the way of Web 2.0